WIP report: 17 May 2022 with excerpt(permalink)
Currently: 21,600/50,000 words
The first draft of CLAY is almost halfway, which is nice. This WIP is pushing me hard against the limitations of my writing ability and I’m having to learn new storytelling and composition techniques on the fly. It hurts my head a lot, and even just pulling a hundred or so words together leaves me quite spent.
But I’ve had a good couple of days. Every beat makes me feel a little more positive about this story, though I still procrastinate and lug around a rucksack of paranoia in between writing sessions.
Anyway, I’d like to share a wee sample with you. First draft, obviously, so it might not end up exactly like this in the final version, but I hope you like it:
Damian Chandrasekhar leans toward the security camera. He rakes a hand through his thick hair, giving it a zhuzh to the left, and knows exactly what he’s doing—or trying to do. He holds his wristlet to his pouty mouth and raises a manicured eyebrow at the lens.
“Half an hour before the drones arrive, Tan. Tick, tick, tick.”
“I said I’m coming, Damo.”
“Want me to head over there?” He grins suggestively. “Could help you come a little quicker.”
“Ha-ha, don’t be gross, dickhead. Now shut up and let me concentrate.”